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©2009 ~Tatsue
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I'm sorry if it looks a little funny...
My scanner did terrible things to this picture... its not like it was wonderful in the first place, but I'm still happy with it. It has been well over a year since I've done anything mildly realistic, so I'm happy that this turned out not looking like an alien.

I think there's something wrong with it though... it just doesn't look right. Can anybody give me a good critique on it and tell me how to fix it? T_T I wanna sell my art at an upcoming con, but I feel like I need to get better than this, so please leave me some feedback. I'd really like to improve.

AH! I figured out that it was mostly his chin being too big. There's something off about his eye still... I think one is just too close to the nose or something, so I'll see if I want to try and fix that... who knows.

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:iconkshawn:
It looks really good to me. As for what's wrong with it... he almost looks too masculine. I'm not entirely sure how to go about fixing that, though.

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I actually really like it! The eyes are super intense and awesome. O.O

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Great job! Very nice shading for this. :aww:

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